Rewrite #1: The Price

The Price

A snapshot, Rewrite #1

The Original

What leads a person down the path of evil? Perhaps, it starts with something small and spirals further and further away from the path of morality. Sometimes, the bad guys start out as good. Keep this in mind before you condemn this character into the bowels of hell. I know it's hard. Let me know what you think and if you've read them both, which version you like better. 


Related Pieces: Appearances 

The Wishing Well Pt. 1

The Wishing Well

Part 1 of 4

Part One :: Part Two :: Part Three :: Part Four

We've all heard of the wishing well even if not all of us believe in its magic but in another world, a heartbroken magic-user makes one in hopes of having the hardships that the world had thrown at him undone.

Note: This story is taking too long for me to complete so I'm going to begin posting it in parts. As always, feedback is appreciated! Let me know what you think, either here or on my writer's page on facebook.

The Price

The Price

A snapshot

This is a standalone piece that isn't for the lighthearted. What price would you pay for freedom and eternal life? What would you destroy? What horror would you commit? When would it become so easy that you'd hardly call it a price to be paid? Would you lose everything you are and should be just to live a little longer in your illusion of freedom? Would you care if you did? Enjoy, or throw up depending on what kind of person you are. Hate it? Love it? Let me know.


Note: This is an older version! You can find the newer one: Here

The Oldest Egg

The Oldest Egg

A short story

Companion piece to: The Foundling

There is a rather curious thing in the oldest hatching grounds. An egg that never hatched yet did not go rancid and did not show any other signs of decay. Young dragons, once they leave the nest, often go upon learning of it to see the curiosity for themselves. Rumors circulate that it can even grant wishes and the lure of having their dreams made true draws those that would not otherwise be interested. 

Needlework

Needlework

A snapshot

Companion piece to The Idle Maiden of Wealth  and  Parting  This can be read on its own but you get more story if you read them all. They can be read in any order but chronologically based on in-story time they are: Parting, Needlework, The Idle Maiden of Wealth. As always, any feedback is welcome and appreciated. Hate it? Love it? Let me know.

Parting

Parting

A snapshot

Companion piece to  "The Idle Maiden of Wealth"   I recommend that you read them both as together they form a clearer picture but they each can stand on their own. As always, feedback positive or negative is  welcome and appreciated.


Related Pieces: Needlework

The Idle Maiden of Wealth

The Idle Maiden of Wealth

A snapshot

Just a short description heavy view into the life of someone trapped in a prison of finery and the simple joy that can free her.


Related Pieces: Parting , Needlework